smadin

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

heyya!
          if u have time and want to, could you please check out any of my stuff?
          id be soo grateful!
          comment, vote, fan?
          thanks a billion if you do!
          
          ~zazozazo~

Would you read my story and i would return the favor...thank you

Hey! i wanned 2 ask if u cld POST da other 2 books of vampire twins here? i read ~linked~ on scribd and i read ~save me~ bt i ddn't complete it and i saw that there was ~Destiny awaits~ and dat it's da 3rd book bt now i can't find any of dem there...could u plz post dem here 2 :)

Hey. I’m Adeline.
          
          I was just wondering –if it wouldn’t be a bother- if you could read my stories? 
          One is called,
          
          “Ravenwood School of Witchcraft and Wizardry” and the other is “Titans: The Escape.”
          
          So, if you could check those out, I won’t bother you anymore, ;D.
          
          Adeline
          
          P.S My stories aren’t those same ones you read all the time. One is a wizard and witchcraft story with no *gasp* vampires. And the other is about superheroes. So if you’re a fan of originality, you should really check out my stories. 
          

Thank you, I look forward to your criticism. lol, if I had a talent like Jane Austen's I'd be rushing to a publisher's door within a heartbeat. :)
          
          -Silverlove

HI! lol im like sorta new o this site and i was hoping if you could possibly check out some of my writings? please? pretty please? please with a cherry on top and whip cream? lol please? lol if you dont i'll understand you know i'll live :( but you know it'll make my day :)

Hey!!! I was wondering if you would read/comment/vote on some of my poems... become a fan maybe??
          Criticism is appreciated also!!
          
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          midnightrise :D

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls

Hey I was wondering if you could visit my profile and check some of my stuff out. It would make my day if you could comment and criticism my work :)
          
          -SilverLove