Hi my name is Bar and I wanted to talk about your story "The Crecset". I love the idea of the story however I do have some things to say, all in good spirits.
1) Does she even feel the mate bond? I understand that they only just met therefore the bond is *relativity * weak however it's like she doesn't even know it is there.
2) Why her and her wolf don't communicate? It is like they are two individuals that just happen to share the same space (Her head!)
3) Can't she feel that she's hurting her mate?? She doesn't have to be so rude, even after two years alone, her wolf is supposed to be happy that she found her mate and new pack. Why is she so mean to her pack members, who has been nothing but kind and welcoming toward their luna, despite the fact that she was a rouge?