RenWritten

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Glad to have made it into your “Good fucking books” list with New Found Kindling ;)

RenWritten

@smexcymother Thank you so much! I love feedback, especially constructive criticism because it literally helps me to get even better. Unfortunately, with so many words and chapters, it’s extremely difficult not to have a few errors every once in a while, but I definitely check for problems before publishing, and I frequently look at previous chapters for mistakes. I prioritize clear correctness.
            
            I was so wary of making Uchida scenes cringey or excessive. I experience secondhand embarrassment very easily, and I’ve disliked so many portrayals of young, specifically female, antagonists because they’re rarely realistic. When you say I would catch more readers with that, are you referring to straight to the point writing?
            
            I usually take about 3-4 hours on normal chapters, but I know how special lemons are, so those are more like 6-7 hours because I want readers to have a wonderful experience without being distracted by bad writing.
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smexcymother

@RenWritten Sure. The amount of  vocabulary that you had was amazing. There were a few spelling mistakes maybe here and there, but overall top notch. The scenes that you had planned out for the chapters with, she who should not be mentioned (uchida), are amazing. Straight to point no dawdling and I think you would catch more reader’s with that in your fur books. And the description of places - especially the lemon scenes- wow, is all I can say. Hope you like the feedback.
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RenWritten

When I receive targeted praise for the book, I like to inquire about what was particularly appreciated for future reference. May I ask your personal answer?
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