emballet5
You did really great writing in English if it is your second language just a few minor mistakes glad I could help!! Sorry this isn't on your story
emballet5
I'm glad they did you are great at it I would have thought it was your first language and you just had some typos!
smile-forever151
@emballet5 Thank you for correcting me.... I have been studying English for 6 years and I fell in love with the language. So I'm trying to learn everything about it and your comments helped.