I'm stopping by to tell you that, seriously, I loved your story, it's been a long time since I stayed up late reading but "I will protect you." The truth is that it left me hooked from the first time. I must tell you that I love the development of the protagonist and what it was like for her to find out about each event. The truth is, I didn't expect anything of what would happen and I'm liking seeing Cameron's point of view, since it gives us more context as to why his personality is like that. Although getting off topic, I would like to know if I can translate your story into Spanish. I will give you your corresponding credits, don't worry ^^
(sorry if my message is not understood, I am using a translator)