I've uploaded the next bit of this current story. I don't know if I've mentioned it yet, but this is a completed story that I'm basically throwing out in piece-meal bits. This is a series I'm currently five parts into (since last year) and it feels pretty good to put it up. It has been beta'd by a few people and revised and edited a few times. I believe this is the fourth draft that I'm posting. It's a short story, so it's easier to edit. I hope people enjoy it... eventually anyway. ;)