smolboicloud

I have a question for you guys. Please be honest. I like criticism, it helps me improve my writing.
          	
          	Does my writing need improvement? 
          	
          	I try to catch all of my grammatical errors. If you see any mistakes, please let me know. 
          	 
          	Do I need to be more descriptive in my stories? 
          	
          	Just let me know.

Polli2123

So far, I think that you are doing a wonderful job with your writing. But if I happen to find any grammar errors, I will try to let you know.
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smolboicloud

I have a question for you guys. Please be honest. I like criticism, it helps me improve my writing.
          
          Does my writing need improvement? 
          
          I try to catch all of my grammatical errors. If you see any mistakes, please let me know. 
           
          Do I need to be more descriptive in my stories? 
          
          Just let me know.

Polli2123

So far, I think that you are doing a wonderful job with your writing. But if I happen to find any grammar errors, I will try to let you know.
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