smuttyromance88

Thank you, everyone, for your input. Just a little backstory, the married couple are separated, but at the point where MMC asks FMC for what happened, there is zero chance (at this stage) that the two will get back together. Divorce is definitely on the table, and they're both living in different homes. It was more of a closure conversation. To reveal more would be too spoilery, so I'll leave it at that, but the general consensus is that everyone is super OK with it as long as it fits the story re betrayal and separation and I think it does. I'll keep the scene in for now, maybe omiting one or two details 

smuttyromance88

Thank you, everyone, for your input. Just a little backstory, the married couple are separated, but at the point where MMC asks FMC for what happened, there is zero chance (at this stage) that the two will get back together. Divorce is definitely on the table, and they're both living in different homes. It was more of a closure conversation. To reveal more would be too spoilery, so I'll leave it at that, but the general consensus is that everyone is super OK with it as long as it fits the story re betrayal and separation and I think it does. I'll keep the scene in for now, maybe omiting one or two details 

smuttyromance88

Question: we all know how we feel about reading on page explicit sex scenes of the MMC and the OW (unless it's relevant to the story), but how do you feel about it in regards to FMC and OM? I'm editing a scene that I've expanded to include more details of their sexual encounter. She's relaying it to the MMC as he wants to know, but I'm doing a flashback scene so we, the reader, know how it all went down. (But she's not going into every single detail with him as that won't make sense, just the events that led up and after, etc. We get the full details) I'm not explicit with it, but I do talk about what they're doing and how she's feeling in the moment that he's touching her. But looking at it, I don't want people to get too triggered reading it, and I can make it more vague. 
          
          Just some background, the FMC and MMC ARE separated from their marriage. I do not consider this cheating (esp in context to why they separated), but I know some people think that even separated, you are still fully married and should not sleep with others. Totally understand this POV, too.❤️
          
          I do have to keep this scene in, though, as it's relevant to what happens afterward, but how detailed should I go 
          
          P.S. my marriage in trouble book is in the editing stages, and hopefully, I can release soon. I'm also looking for possible Beta readers!

Gossipgirl2325

@smuttyromance88 would love to be a beta reader!!!
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bitemealienboy2023

If he deserves some pain, give us details. If he has mostly earned his way back to her, maybe less details. I think it depends on how much we want the mmc and mfg back at that moment how much the details will cause discomfort. 
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smuttyromance88

Hi everyone,
          
          Maria Undone is now LIVE on Kindle Unlimited or for purchase on Amazon. Thank you so much for your support. If you feel inclined, please also leave a review and/or rating. I can't thank you enough for sticking with this journey with me.
          
           Next - I'm going to work on a marriage in trouble story, plus finish off His Stolen Queen. Follow me on s.t.moorsauthor on Insta as I'm on there the most.
          
          Link for Maria Undone - https://shorturl.at/t4NPZ

smuttyromance88

Hi everyone!
          
          Maria's book is currently being emailed out to you. Please give it thirty minutes. I only had an issue with one email address, so if your name is Ayesha please DM me on one of my socials as I think you entered your address wrong.
          
          Any issues, please let me know. Please do not spoil the book on book groups as it is releasing on Nov 30 (maybe sooner). Please forgive any grammar or spelling errors as I'm am still editing. Eventually, I will start removing the chapters so far on Wattpad.
          
          Happy reading and thank you so much for reading Maria Undone so far x

maze168

@smuttyromance88 Did you want us to let you know of any typos? I've found one, not sure if it's still being proofed as it'll probably be found then.
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pro_pro_casti_nator

@smuttyromance88 got it, thank you so much!! I'm so excited to read it!!❤️
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Bertha877

I can’t wait to get it on my Kindle to add to my collection of your books
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