I probably have never done this before but can I please, please have someone look over my story and give me your full brutal honest opinion. I wanna do this story and another but if the writing sucks or storyline then I wanna go back and fix it.
@Avatar8910
Thank you so much I'm going to start putting in a lot of changes and do my best to make it better. Thank you for taking the time to read it and give some really great advice.