smuttystuffonly

If anyone is looking for a good book to read I highly suggest this one. 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/218697580

smuttystuffonly

I probably have never done this before but can I please, please have someone look over my story and give me your full brutal honest opinion. I wanna do this story and another but if the writing sucks or storyline then I wanna go back and fix it. 

Avatar8910

Yeah, no problem! If you want me to do that for future chapters, lemme know. I’m happy to help
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smuttystuffonly

@Avatar8910 
            Thank you so much I'm going to start putting in a lot of changes and do my best to make it better. Thank you for taking the time to read it and give some really great advice.
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Avatar8910

Okay, I left a buttload of comments on it. Now I’ve gotta actually eat the food I made
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