snazzychic

Good story line but chapters are way to short. Has the potential to be something great tho. Perhaps you should consider re-doing it and extending the chapters and adding more detail. I do like it tho but just thought I would share my opinion. It's original tho and I think it could be fantastic if you extended it :) well done tho hey!

@dwkitten13 Hey it's a start :) so I read that you like I do role plays? I've never done one before how do they work?

@snazzychic  I didn't really help, but yeah no problem. 

@dwkitten13 Ok thanks :)

@snazzychic other then youtube not really......

@dwkitten13 Yep :) do you happen to know any good websites where I can watch doctor who episode for free? I'm trying to get a friend to watch 

@snazzychic oh...well not that much age difference....

@dwkitten13 17

@snazzychic  yeah.......I'm 13 how old are you, if you don't mind me asking....just wondering. We seem to have a lot in common..

@dwkitten13 Hmm true...that could be a teensy problem .