Just started re-writing Ocean's Storm two weeks ago, and I am hoping that this version goes a lot better than the last three versions. There will be quite a few changes to this re-write. For one, Ocean's perspective is getting completely cut from this new version. I want Ocean to come off as an authentic Australian character that talks about what life was like back in Australia and even had Australian vocabulary. Unfortunately, I have never been outside of the United States, and, therefore, cannot do Ocean's perspective much justice. He will remain in the story as the main male character, but I haven't decided if I want to have his accent mentioned or just Americanize him.
Also doing some major editing and reading through each chapter before releasing the new version. I am hoping to get through with this new version by early next year, but we will just have to wait and see. Each time I re-write this story, I feel like I get a better idea of where I want this story to go.