@Ashen-chan You can never have too much on one chapter. Write as much as you can and then more. Don't rush character development. Let it gradually show as time passes. This helps the reader get to know the characters. Don't add in too many confusing details, as it might get the reader confused on what is happening. Also, don't post announcements in the story. It shows up to be 20 chapters, but only 5 of them are the actual story. That's basically it. None of it is directed towards you. All those things can make for a good story.
