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Hey author please check out my story childhood lost love ( Elsa x Jack )
          
          Hope you like it
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/311964524?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mysteryauthor7a&wp_originator=tz81pKVEqwIsQNpZbL6MnKuUC85RtUJRGiYR1PZeEvaYc9qFVUb5FGaj%2BwzJbJ7iwqrfCqrruBngbhiSdeuuXt%2BfIkEatGX4Qexnj3JVmtrxpCn6Q2NMQ%2FORa33WTh3X

Could you please check out my book and share it to others?? Thank you.

TLDR: Reading Loving You: I want to make a quick stop to personally congratulate you. 
          
          Warning: It may sound like a diss. But it's not. Hear me out. 
          
          Your English isn't that of a native English speakers (I mean, I am not one either but hear me out). And by this I mean that you have bad grammar. Or maybe you're just young?? I don't know your story and I'm not here to judge you on it, but I'm sure it's no secret to you as well. 
          
          At least in that book. Maybe it's old? Idk. I haven't read the rest or finished this one. 
          
          But.
          
          You didn't let that set it as an excuse for not writing. You write. You try. And boy do you have great ideas, and a mansion (aka lots of room) for improvement.
          
           Keep doing what you're doing. Keep exercising your English speaking brain. And you'll see that not only your language but also your writing will improve. And that's amazing considering your writing is already great.
          
          To be honest, I'm the type of person to give stories with multiple grammatical errors a hard pass. I just get annoyed  But dude, your story is worth it  despite the errors in verb tenses, spelling, etc. 

Omg I'm so happy I found you!! I LOVE JELSA!!! and I completely agree, 100%, I would also die of happiness if Disney made Jack Elsa's love interest in Frozen 2!

I'll try to reply to all your comment this monday :)

And wow! 448 followers! I cant believe it. Thank you ( ˘ ³˘)❤ lovelots 

I'm so sorry that i havent replied to all your comments. I really appriaciate all of you that love my books. Thank you guys. ❤Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ i'll update soon. I think this april i can update again. Sorry to keep you waiting.  Lovelots 

Snowblue09 please update Pretend lovers I like your books and your a great writer and pls. Read one of my books..
          T.Y

Your books are amazing! Can you plzzzzzzz update pretend lovers

love your stories I'm a fan of jisela too