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You should definitely kip writing. Make it interesting,not the cliche virgin who falls in love with her first lover,and i'm a perv so i say make it a little dirtier(if dat is even a word). Give leyla more balls after d fist sex scene. In short make it a sizzling,sexy romance thingy. 

HEY I'm sorry to badge you like this but please I'm new and it would mean so much to me if you could take a time to go my profile and read my story 
          
          "DONT HURT ME, I'M A VIRGIN"
          
          please its only one chapter please comment whether or not I should keep writing thank you :D