Ann-Marie Lovett

Hi! So Ahem! I'm actually embarrassed to ask you this but would you mind to take a look at my first book( Days of our lives) it's in my profile, you don't have to vote or anything, but maybe you could tell me if i did something wrong then i can fix it, i accept any kind of critics, i just want to make the most of this writing experience:)
          Thanks for your time, have a good one:)  

Thanks for following me. I hope you'll enjoy the books that I have written so far :)

Any books on boarding school setting?  Magical?Vamp? Any suggestions?