soccer180

Hey, I just started writing this book and I was wondering what people thought of it. I know it's not very good and there's a lot of mistakes but it would be great if you guys could give me some feedback so I could know what I need to fix. Please be respectful though. 

soccer180

Hey, I just started writing this book and I was wondering what people thought of it. I know it's not very good and there's a lot of mistakes but it would be great if you guys could give me some feedback so I could know what I need to fix. Please be respectful though.