I just realized I am your first ever follow. You are a very talented writer and storyteller and I guarantee I’m the first of many. Keep up the great work
Just finished your first installment of Written In Blood and Prada. It was very well written and enjoyable. A mobster story with a fantasy twist no one could see coming lol. When Slim was last with his wife he was still a man. When she woke up Slim was Agent Torres a woman. Either gangster fantasy or dream sequence. Since they’re in Vegas I’d bet gangster fantasy. I’m looking forward to the next installment to find out what happens to Carletti jr to find out if he gets pinched or shot. Keep writing. You’re very talented.
Good luck with the contest then. I’m sure you’ll do well in it. I just read the Ferry chapter. Again very well written. Lucy and her dad are excellent characters. I’m interested to read on. I throw my keys in a bowl like her dad does or else I’d never find my keys. You are a talented storyteller and writer. Keep it going
@glel1991 Hi, Thank you for the review and your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, however, It was written as a one off for a Wattpad competition, although if it gets enough love I would consider moving the story forward.