i decided to change up some words in the most second recent chapter.
i'm not very comfortable being straight forward and i feel like if i had used the actual word like how i did before i changed things, it would make the readers not want to read anymore. i tried to keep it still in character and i hope it didn't upset you guys. i'm not used to writing about these kinds of things, especially with minors but i wanted to try something.
a lot of the kids i'm around in america already do the things we're told not to do such as drinking, smoking, having sex and such so i thought it wouldn't have been a problem.
i'm contemplating on taking the story down and rewriting the plot because i'm not all too sure if this is appropriate to write about, seeing seojun and a lot of other members are minors.
please let me know what you all think. thank you and apologies if the story is not turning out to be good. i will work harder and try to fix it to your liking. again, thank you.