Sol425 please continue your book im very interested by your depth and detail of the accounts that have happened while you were steping up when strong men where standing down and i am proud to tell you i have talked to a local recruter so hopefully i will be able to follow in youre footsteps
you have great content. exand a little more on the specifics in a few areas. I think if you did an outline you could organize it so that it would track better. This could be a best seller with a little help.
The last book i read on fallujah was house to house. He left out a lot which makes uour story more real. He made it seem like it was just AQ and jihadists and the civilian weren't in thw city at all.