VaelisRune

Hi authorrr...just finished reading when rivals fall and its so amazing...the chapters were a bit lengthy but so well written and the character developement is fabbb

VaelisRune

@someoneudontk The tension is really good. I also write rivals-to-lovers if you’d like to check it out 
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someoneudontk

@VaelisRune Hiiii..Thanks a lott for reading this story and liking it✨.
            Yup, I agree that few chapters were lengthy its just that I wanted to be as detailed as possible. And yup the character development for all of them is just✨✨.
            Anyways I'm so glad that you liked the story, again Thanks.
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shubhXwrites

shubhXwrites

@someoneudontk  I apologise, for it.
            Just wanna get readers to read the story 
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someoneudontk

@shubhXwrites May I know why did you post the story in my feed....?
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Priyantha2002

Hi, iam currently reading your book - when rivals fall..iam so confused by the progress of the story..one moment, sana is scared of the mysterious note, that shadow and the footprint and kushal seems to notice this; next moment, they are planning for annual day celebration with rishab planning something for sniti and next, Armaan's grandpa falls ill and sana and kushal are discussing history project together? I mean I don't feel the connection here. Is the chapters correctly arranged? Iam so confused author ji

Priyantha2002

@someoneudontk oh god thankyou so much! Is it published? 
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someoneudontk

@Priyantha2002 Actually, I think that I forgot to save that part. Though I remember that I had written it but I think it did not get saved and I published it without checking. So sorry for causing inconvenience, I have republished chapter 14, in which it shows Sana's flashback of her parents getting back, and she tells her parents and a few days later the culprit is caught. Thanks again, I got to improve my mistake cuz of you...
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hrudayaxreader

heyyy,I want to write a story will u help me if u wish to?

hrudayaxreader

@someoneudontk byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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hrudayaxreader

sure but on 1 march
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