KobayashiCraig

Thanks for voting on chapter one! Any thoughts? Took me a while to figure out the egg, was starting to feel like it was going to turn into the trap door in Lost or something.

KobayashiCraig

@Ceoss2000 thanks, I really appreciate your input! Yeah, finally figured out the egg - I hope it works out like it did in my head last night. Will talk more when it hatches ;)
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somethingenticingidk

@KobayashiCraig The chapter was good. The egg rally intriuges me, like how can something so small be a reward for an accomplishment that big, like is it going to hatch into a dragon or something? Guess I will have to find out ehen it hatches. Also I have a feeling that G formed a bond with the egg and became its father. Who would its mother be than. Athios maybe. Anyways sorry about the long post, just really love the story so far. Keep up the good work!
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KobayashiCraig

Hey! Thanks for following! I hope you like my stories :)
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KobayashiCraig

@Ceoss2000 thanks, I'm so happy to hear that! I just finished up a side project and am back to working on MMOA, plan to have it finished before 2019!
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somethingenticingidk

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somethingenticingidk

@KobayashiCraig I love mmo apocalypse. Can't wait for teh sequel keep up the good work
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Cross-Warrior

So are you on Namek or New Namek? *insert thinking face

somethingenticingidk

@Cross-Warrior I've watched super and it makes sense how he comes back
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Cross-Warrior

@CrossShock Don't worry. A guy from the future chops him to pieces xD (though he somehow comes back in Super. Haven't watched so I have no idea how. So I'm still counting him as dead xD)
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somethingenticingidk

@Cross-Warrior Yeah definitely New Namek. I can't breath in space. Also, SCREW YOU FRIEZA
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