Leena Sona

Hey, I would love it if you'd give a chance to my book. I am an new author here. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/404005999?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Aesh_Ilhan

Hello you asked the link but I can't post there so here it is just read ch 2 please I need feedback 
          I a just a reader but tried to write 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401385831?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=musk2004