sweething69

sunshine...i added a a few commints at the end of chapter 24.  i hope you like them.  question.. do you want thoughts on any more of your story, or are you ok with it as. i was on chapt 37, if you want me to, i will go back to 25 and start from there.  please let know what you want me to do....hun it is your story.  i will do if you request. ...tasha

sweething69

hi sunshine....i plan to start in the middle of chapter 23 >24>25
          tonight or tommorow.  in the last few months i have developed a medical problem where i can not sit longer than an hour at my desk top computer.
          my right leg has started swelling drasticly.  the are running test to find out why.   i wish there was i way that i could send you messages away from public eyes.  there are places in your story that touched my heart dearly, a lot of tears, but i will not say much because i don't like other people see/knowing.  where i live over here in the u.s., i have to keep the fasad of of no enotion for survival.  i have to go (because of leg) will be back later....tasha

sweething69

hi shunsine ...i will go back and reread your story....i love your storys and you.
          hun, please let me share a little bit about me.  sunshine, ishare my thoughts with you, but i do want you changing your storys suit me.  i want your storys to be how  and what you want them be.  the moment that you share with me that you wrote it that way....on purpose...i was good with it.  i am here to help, if you desired, not control or push.  they are you story, your desires, your dreams...thank you for being a friend...tasha

sweething69

Hi sunshine.....i love you stories....i am sorry....but I have to be mean for a short minute.
          i am reading “Lisha-The flower begains to smile” on  chapter...i am totally surprised that you left out one of the major points in any love.  If you go and visit any one who has fallen love and you ask the ….when you ask them “what was the most memorable moment it in  relationship” ….and the answer 90% 0f the time is “the  First Kiss “.
          I use to be a counselor..my mean part... with out the first tender kiss...you have left a big giant hole in your story.  The was a place where it was kind of implyed but it wasn't but you are left wondering.  It leave me wondering ...Why....you left the first kiss out because it is the most romantic seen....tasha .

sonev888

@sweething69   Kindly read again :  LISHA Part 24 : Pure, unadulterated saree magic, i have added more romance, please give your feedback. you are one person, who always gives the right feedback, an auther always values authentic readers.
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sweething69

hi sunshine....it is your story do with it what you want with it.  but always keep in mind when you remove everything...they become nothing more than room mate, just friends.....it loses it special bond.
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sonev888

@sweething69 I  know, this time i puposefully avioded all types of sexulal gestures, including kisses in this story, a pure romantic one, but you if insists i 'll rewrite!
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AlbyRoy

Njan read cheytha oru story ind very interesting aane avar ath continue cheyynila...... Aa type oru story cheyyamo.... ..... Njan athiite oru amugham parayan if u interested

AlbyRoy

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            Kooduthal  girls ane interview varunnekilum ale oru boy il atract avannu
            
            A business owner nu  ammayum oru aniyathem. Ane ullath
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            Secretary avunna alum nalla cash ulla al aane but swatham joli cheyth jeevikan vendi avde job nokkunn
            
            Ivar thammilulla bond um  personal secretary avunna ale oru female secretary ayt marunnathum ane
            Sthrevalkaranathilek pokunna unexpected karyanglum anganoke  onnu cheyyamo aa type
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AlbyRoy

Sona njan ithil type akkiya mathio
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sonev888

@AlbyRoy yes, go ahead
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sweething69

hi sunsine....could you explain something that i may have missed in "the 2nd charm: the great identiy swap...  what does ramachandra  really think about argan pretending to be arti his daughter, and his real daughter prepend to be argan a boy...and in love about to be married...i think i missed it....thank you ...tasha