sophiarosehips

Hi! I'd be glad to hear more detail on your observations about the characters' reactions. Which characters? Reacting to which events? Thanks for the feedback!

JazzFeathers

Hi Sophia ^_^
          
          Hey, I nearly missed you comment. I’s still trying to understand how Wattpad works, so sorry for my delayed answer. 
          
          This box doesn't allow me to send the answer I've written to you. I'm forwarding it over on Goodreads. See you there ^_^

JazzFeathers

Hi Sophia. Looks like we dieselpunks meet everywhere we go ^_^
          
          I've started your novel and I'm enjoying it. Personally, I find characters' reactions to be generally not as strong as I'd like them (but this might as well just be me ;-)), but I'm very much into the mystery behind the city government. 
          
          I'll let you know as I go ^_^