Just started Wattpad please tell me what I need to improve on

I'm not too great at this but if I have spelt something or done something grammatically incorrect then feel free too correct me as most of the time I'm half asleep when I write
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  • JoinedMarch 16, 2022



Story by Sophie18
It was him by sophie23739
It was him
It's like they've always been in love or was it all just a game?