I love your bully stories. But i want to request that Hannah's POV(point of view) AND Nat's POV gets expressed.
I think that you're trying to make Hannah be the main character, but Nat now plays a big important role in the story too and they've become a big focus together as a whole and i feel that Nat's feelings and thoughts need to be expressed by her as well. Sorry if i come out as rude and pushy. I dont mean to. I'm Eden by the way, im 13. Read my book if you like i dont mind if you dont. Ps Hannah is actually the name of my cousin, LOL coincidence! I may not be on your wall to see your reply so if you want you can reply on mine. Thanks again.