I’m so glad you enjoyed my first two chapters! I spent so much time tweaking them so that they really drew the reader in, so I appreciate you saying that. I agree that I should add more description the interaction with Sara, however I was using the fact that she left so quickly and wouldn’t let hope sit in set up some suspicion at why she would do that. I can understand how that didn’t come across that way and I’m gonna tweak it some more so people can get that plot point I am setting up. Thank you so much for your honest opinion and if you choose to read the rest I hope you like it as much I like writing it!!