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@VARHARARM Its no problem at all!!! Thank you so much for asking for my feedback and good luck with your book!!!❤️

@Straykidz13143 thank you so much for your kind words I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed my story. Your encouragement means a lot to me!
            I'll definitely keep updating my story  and I'm grateful for readers like you who make the journey worthwhile. Thanks again for your support and encouragement! >_<

Omggg your story is really good!!! I honestly don't have any feedback on where you should correct it because it's already so detailed and amazing!!! I’m definitely the one who needs to take advice from you to improve my story  My only feedback would be to keep updating bc I NEED to find out what happens next