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clawing my way through finals, chapter 3 of the winter's heir is posted!
starlight21124
Thank you for following me.
I really enjoyed reading The Winter’s Heir. It was very engaging. I look forward to reading the rest of your story.
soupyjpeg
@starlight21124 No problem! The only thing I can recommend is describing the setting a little more when the scene changes. I find it makes the story more immersive and enables the reader to really visualize what they're reading! Other than that I think it's great :)
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starlight21124
Thank you for checking out my book and for voting! I would appreciate any feedback.
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soupyjpeg
chapter 2 of the winter's heir is posted :)
Dina20562
@soupyjpeg umm...request lang po kung puwede..puwede po vote ninyo po yung storya ko please..promise i will vote rin sa'yo..
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