soupyjpeg

clawing my way through finals, chapter 3 of the winter's heir is posted!

starlight21124

Thank you for following me. 
          
          I really enjoyed reading The Winter’s Heir. It was very engaging. I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

starlight21124

Thank you for the feedback! I’ll see what I can do. 
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soupyjpeg

@starlight21124 No problem! The only thing I can recommend is describing the setting a little more when the scene changes. I find it makes the story more immersive and enables the reader to really visualize what they're reading! Other than that I think it's great :)
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starlight21124

Thank you for checking out my book and for voting! I would appreciate any feedback.
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soupyjpeg

chapter 2 of the winter's heir is posted :)

Dina20562

@soupyjpeg umm...request lang po kung puwede..puwede po vote ninyo po yung storya ko please..promise i will vote rin sa'yo..
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Dina20562

@soupyjpeg hi po thank you po sa following..
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