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Hi there! I'm writing a book called "Runs Scarlet", it's an in progress book and I'm looking for some advice on how to make it better. I'm almost done writing but if you would read it and tell me what you like or don't like that would mean a lot to me!
          It's a Mafia brother type book, pretty common on Wattpad, but it does have a special twist of mine..lots of them actually since it's my own story! :)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373016048-runs-scarlet

Heya!
          
          I hope you are doing well.
          
          Apologies for sliding into your profile, but do check out my story if time permits. It will mean a lot!❤️
          
          The story is complete and is more on a realistic side, which hopefully you will connect to!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/262286159?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ruhani_Gupta&wp_originator=Yi%2FcgRspTueatuHNLbVqL%2FtyKkNN%2F15VdXbrALLpYb%2FjEHseA0nhP%2FSH1b%2B71qszUv4ukxJMp3YQV%2FH%2BB4%2BeEZZpmUKoMDwlMBNzbnK8Y%2BqK8YbjhwnB2N6pp0VP%2FIFK,p
          
          

Hello/Namaste!
          Sorry for disturbing.
          I hope you're taking care of yourself.
          If you want to read a realistic story, please check out this beautiful story of my dear friend.I'm sure it will not fail to impress you.
          Thank you for letting me disturb you.
          Bye!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/272736667?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Sonalinefelibata&wp_originator=4I5Yca8pT5uY8b5uT6yuLDlh2iqLLrMEKR64PJ0pRS9g0EshNsSAr9j59ez6v2MazmvvYW26QQmHZJAhXUponlUm9x%2F6RS8MXKnqoO7TrbtyB%2Bn7OaHR4V4BFKLgvCDN