
lifechange2236
This app is weird...I'm on my phone and it won't let me comment on your new story: I'm glad you're back writing. I love your super hero stories! Excellent comedy, use of puns. Layla seemed adequately nervous but my qualm was w/ the Dad. Was he in shock? He seemed a little too cool for my liking. How does he know his daughter won't be treated like a science experiment?