@narnian112396 Well you didn't have any fans which I thought was odd because I liked your writing a lot. You have talent! I'm more of a reader. My brain goes so fast I find it harder to write, but. Wish I could do it like you so. I think I have one page of a story that I quit because, well, the plot frankly sucked. I have written another few chapters on word, and once the story line is organized I think I'll put it on here. Good lick with yur story I want to read it