
Jgirl-Knows-All
Why hello there friend!

Jgirl-Knows-All
Yeah I was going to do that but then I totally forgot about it so I'm going to go back and fix it
•
Reply

spicybadwolf
Lol, I noticed. But thats fine, whatever it takes for you to edit or make the story good. Oh and just a tip for your next update, you add "quotations" whenever a person speaks so it doesn't confuse the reader with it being part of the paragraph. Gets them more in the mood and seems more "realistic." ;)
•
Reply