This is a little poem i wrote at school. please give feedback, because im submiting it to a comp.
The anger rising,
We're all in despair'
Who to save us,
The blood of a man.
No one to save us now,
They are all dead,
For another,
Another man, hungry for red.
All I see is red.
Why must we fight?
Why be consumed?
For power,
For money,
Who may know?
All I see is red