Hi...I'm currently reading Into the light.....but I've to say this....because for me you're an amazing writer, I enjoyed so much the first part of this story...
How you described Adelaide life in the first part was absolutely breathtaking....love, hate, friendship...in short, everything a story needs to contain, to keep me reading until the end.
But this part....the only thing I found so far....was Adelaide and Peter beautiful relationship..and a lot of chapter of just kissing. Don't take it the wrong way, I love the way you describe everything, because I repeat you are a very good writer. But maybe I expected more interactions between Adelaide and the Avengers, and life with Tony and Peter.
Having said that, I REPEAT, YOU ARE A FANTASTIC, TALENTED WRITER....thanks and I'll definitely read some of your other stories.