AliIbrahimi6

....age chart
           ….when had 7 years difference got tie in Nikha in childhood or say young age ...
          Ayat 13 -Talha 20 ….years when Ayat was brought to Ahmed house, 
          Ayat 14 -Talha 21 when modi born , 
          Ayat 17 doing her schooling - Talha 24 -complete masters ready to join family business - Mohit 3 years when parent died in car accident , 
          Ayat 20 - Talha 27 when Abid Ahmed done the rukhsaty and waleema...

justt_manii

@AliIbrahimi6 i think u should write, it's amazing 
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AliIbrahimi6

.....Talha who in real love ayat form long but never realized started show his love dn interest in ayat after his brother bhabi’s death in care accident when he was how ayat take care his father mohid him and there house being so young and childish but got heart break because of Talha’s unnecessary close friendship with sabeeka even if its platonic relationship and Talha realized his mistake when Abid Ahmed try to get ayat divorce from Talha and make her marry to some one else as he to go angry and hurt he to heard the rumors sabeeka beign with in relationship with talha was spreading with proof of some photos Vedio’s taken when they went on dinner lunch shopping together or attend any friends or business party as couple or colleague  taking  advance of Talha’s stupidity done in anger and rudeness of not accepting ayat as his wife and their nikah after finding out and broke ayat heart  and now wanted to ayat to forgive him and accept him .....
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AliIbrahimi6

hi,  will you like to write something on this kind of Story pliot
            Talah and ayat got in nikha in childhood which Talha forgot and never remember and his father to forgot to remind him got busy in life business after his wife death…. But ayat remember as her dadi remind her all the time…ayat stay with he dadii after her parents death….but later come to Ahmed house after her dadi’s death..Abid Ahmed his elder son adn younger son and new wedded wife andaleep welcome ayat open heartedly ….but Talha who got propose by sabeeka a friend from undergrads college agree to go on a date …and when abid Ahmed found about Talha geting infested in sabeeka he inform him and put his nikah with ayat in his anger and arrogance of no testing right to select his life partner he stared to say away form ayat and even ignore ayat as much as possible like she never exists for him …but never stop sabeeka from her advance and she assuming that Talha love her as she was only girl as his fired and the way he entrain her ten her to dinner lunch on he request or demand to be a good friend but saber take all wrong and so all other friends too hciha talha realized later seeing ayat distancing from him and unknowingly encourage sabeeka who will cause tto many rouble later in his life and future when ayat found out and saw her introducing herself as Talha’s girlfriend and only love from college days and soon to be fiancé /wife
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AliIbrahimi6

Talh’s Dream losing Ayat:
          
          if possible ....add a part or new story when sabeeka come to him and proves against Ayat complaining about parking lot insolent to throw her way form life na office OR start from Talha reject Ayat in beach breaking her heart trust hope ...START FROM HERE.....make Talha see DREAM losing Ayat and how Ayat's life to destroying in that process plus him getting married with sabeeka and living disastrous life and suffering mohit in the hand of sabeeka and unhappy sad father ... so when he wake up from the dream ..he correct his all mistake and do right thing by wooing Ayat back ....
          thank you

AliIbrahimi6

Hi, if possible ....add a part or new story when sabeeka come to him and proves against Ayat complaining about parking lot insolent to throw her way form life na office OR start from Talha reject Ayat in beach breaking her heart trust hope ...START FROM HERE.....make Talha see DREAM losing Ayat and how Ayat's life to destroying in that process plus him getting married with sabeeka and living disastrous life and suffering mohit in the hand of sabeeka and unhappy sad father ... so when he wake up from the dream ..he correct his all mistake and do right thing by wooing Ayat back ....thank you