— Yours | Beomjun
• most popular one
• need proofreading
• very chaotic, too much going on
• cheating is so.. [tea] ☕
• badly explained, i could work on it more if i wasnt that lazy to write it
• fav part: ending
8.5/10
— Forgive you | Taegyu
• BADLY WRITTEN
• RUSHED
• confusing
• the yeki plot was lacking
• the forgiving part lacked
• it was ok at first and i had some ideas as well as twists
• need emphasizing and proofreading
6/10
— The same path | Taegyu
• angstyyyy
• the order of the story and the plot is ok and interesting
• took a real turn and .... twist
• good story to make a part 2 or a sequel
• was greatly written at first until i got lazy
7/10