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@Mickiemonie thank you. About comparing the situation will you please explain? Yes, I was planing on making Ryan's characters playful. Thanks again for you feedback 

@i-am-a-addict It's pretty good. Don't compare all the situations. It sure add more words to your chapter , but the fewer you add unexpectedly,  will it be better. Are u making Ryan's character a playful one? It's actually going good. Good luck with your writing.

@Mickiemonie Hiii could you please check  out my story, I would like your feedback. This is my first time writing, I will highly appreciate it.