midnightwrts

Hie, cutiee pie. I'm new here and I'm writing my first story. Will you please give my book a chance and be my first reader I just want someone who can read my story and tell me if it's good or not, OR what I can improve, should I counting or not. 
          
          Will you be my first ever Wattpad bestie? 
          
          "Whispers Of Forever"  https://www.wattpad.com/story/365364697?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=midnightwrts