AliIbrahimi6

HI, if possible will you fulfill the request....
          By write a story if possible love to read a story from the day he push her away no the beach till he win her back ......OR..... from the day he took place of her groom on  Ayat marriage by join hand with her dadaji to save her, and after how he manage to melt Ayat not exactly like the drama show (as they made her melt so easily and quickly) but change it and increase the timing for Talh to win Ayat back and show how Ayat give him tough and hard time before accepting him back .... like here you mention "it had take Talha several weeks to melt her and break the shell ice walls down Ayat had made around her heart and not ready to accept him as the marriage and him her husband... Thank you

AliIbrahimi6

if ok add let Talha now, as he had refuse to hear Ayat side that time before breaking her, why she talk rudely to Sabeeka, now make him know see Sabeeka' manipulative way and how she provoke Ayat and make him push her away using Ayat age as weapon to keep Ayat way from him, and become innocent infornt of Talha hiding he won deeds and provoke Talha against Ayat ...and Talha being jerk in anger so carelessly reject Ayat's feeling for him by shatter her heart and trust.
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Nadiyaaa_18

Hey
          As you said i will upload an Eid special but you haven't posted it yet.
          I hope you are okay 

Nadiyaaa_18

@ss7427 thank you 
            Can't wait to read it ok Am going 
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ss7427

@Nadiya0118 I just updated sis.. go read
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Atoryyyy

Heyy dear writer 
          
          I just had an idea and wanted to share it with you. What if Roshi's college selects her for a project abroad that lasts 7 to 10 days? It would be the first time after marriage that she has to be separated from Talha, and she has to go alone.
          
          It’s incredibly tough for both of them, but they try to stay strong and calm each other—even though deep down, they’re both struggling with the thought of being apart.
          
          For Roshi, it’s even more challenging. She not only has to travel alone to a foreign country, but she also has to leave behind Mohid, her little jaanu, her best friend, her heartbeat.
          
          I want to explore how they cope with being separated, especially when they’re so used to seeing each other every day. They can't even go a single day without being in each other’s presence—just seeing each other brightens their moods.
          
          (Talha supports her throughout and encourages her to accept the project)
          
          So how will they manage without that comforting presence, even if it’s just for a few days? I’d love to see how this emotional distance unfolds between them.
          
          If you like this idea, maybe you can include it in the story. If not, that’s totally okay too!

ss7427

@Atoryyyy The idea is amazing! I will definitely do my take on this. The potential for yearning and everything is amazing  I'll do this soon enough ❤️ Thank you for this wonderful idea... if you got more feel free to share more
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