It's really good, I've already added it to my library and can't wait to read more but no pressuring...
The first line has a bit of punctuation wrong with safety? Umm, if you're doing two Point of views then either write down its their P.O.V or let ur readers know in ur story description that it's Pangur and then Cassius so no-one gets confused but it's entirely up to u! Have u read one of my books then? Just wondering I've been trying to get some feedback but no-one has anything to say. I'm not as descriptive as u are tho. ;) keep up the good work.