I’m going through and editing my chapters one by one. No plot changes, just some description/grammar changes, adding some more dialogue in some spots. Unfortunately, that means some comments aren’t linked to certain paragraphs anymore. it makes me so sad, but I see so many opportunities for the story to improve in some spots, so it had to be done :( That’s the difficulty of writing weekly, you see things after you post that will nag you till you fix it. I’ve been at this story going on 16 weeks, and I feel like I’ve grown in my writing since then, so I want the older chapters to reflect that too. But ANYWAYS, new chapter coming Sunday :)