starsloincloth

Wow, can't believe I've been on Wattpad since middle school. Seriously, started off here out of boredom and now about to go to college. This particular account is new, but it's still so crazy to think about how much time has passed. When my coursework gets lighter I'm planning to post new chapters for all my current stories.
          	
          	Happy Thnksgiving everyone!!

starsloincloth

Wow, can't believe I've been on Wattpad since middle school. Seriously, started off here out of boredom and now about to go to college. This particular account is new, but it's still so crazy to think about how much time has passed. When my coursework gets lighter I'm planning to post new chapters for all my current stories.
          
          Happy Thnksgiving everyone!!

starsloincloth

Finally finished reading Purple Haze Feedback-
          
          Fricking loved it~
          
          I have a soft spot for my favorite cheese boi and I love his emotional journey so much 
          
          And Sheila E. is such a great character too~
          
          Best believe that if I ever write a story based around Golden Wind that I’d include details I learned from the story!!
          
          Like how Giorno doesn’t like greasy food/chicken since it’s all his mother would make for dinner every night when he was a kid (google yakitori) and it was a bad experience for him as a child-
          
          And how Trish used to sing with her Mom on stage before she passed away 
          
          Oh, and I’d definitely include Pericolo’s son in there!! (The old man who dropped off Trish and told the team about their mission)

starsloincloth

I’m starting to realize that perfectionism is what has kept me from publishing many chapters of my stories. To all writers I say this: it’s okay if your story isn’t perfect right now, especially since it’s fanfic. Publish something you’re proud of, of course, but don’t stress out over every little thing. If needed, go back and revise it on a later date with a fresh pair of eyes.
          
          I’ll start publishing more chapters soon, even if it’s been years. My fire for writing has never died out.

starsloincloth

Just posted some newly revised chapters of As Clear as Night! Currently working on the New Chapters as well!
          For old readers: There’s a lot of new plot points being added and slight changes, though there are more changes after the first chapter. If you don't want to reread the entire thing, then scroll to the bottom where I wrote some extra short stories!
          
          More than anything, I hope that you enjoy!

Gray_Sama_

@starsloincloth I missed this story too! I know what it’s like to take a long break and then keep writing (I’m writing a Dio fic as well) so don’t worry, loyal readers stick around! (:
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TrashPanda067

@starsloincloth I missed this story! ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
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starsloincloth

Here's a poll!
          After painstakingly rewriting my old chapters a hundred times over, I need help choosing the opening sentence in the prologue. Which one sounds better?
          
          1) This is a story of corruption, one full of wrong choices, regrets, but most importantly, a lesson to be learned from this pitiful attempt at redemption.
          
          OR
          
          2) This is a story of corruption, and a pitiful attempt at atonement. One filled with wrong choices, remorse, but most importantly, a lesson to be learned.

Princess_Crystonia

@starsloincloth omg you're welcome I'm so glad I could help ^_^
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starsloincloth

@Princess_Crystonia Yes, that helps the sentence flow much better. Thanks!
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Princess_Crystonia

but I would put a full stop after corruption and let the rest of words be its own sentence 
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fugo_dick_cheese

Bro u alive???

fugo_dick_cheese

@starsloincloth  i see this as an absolute win!
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starsloincloth

@fugo_dick_cheese you inflate my ego! ( ノ∀ ̄〃) I'll promise to release a chapter soon especially for you!
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fugo_dick_cheese

@starsloincloth  ohh alright. Im sure the new chapter will be amazing as always, and of course I'll check in on one of my favoirite authors!
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