stawbewydreamer

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shinedreamlove

Hi! I loved ur writing  and I'd  reallly  like it of u could review my book and tell me how to improvise.

stawbewydreamer

Thank you for the support btw that means a lot and if you need anymore help in the future, I’ll be happy to help
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stawbewydreamer

Hi, I just read a few of the chapters of your book. I will say that you are a fantastic writer, but I would advise you to shorten your sentences. They do not need to be that long.
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