sthawriter

Chapter 5! Big Reveal!
          	I just published "Chapter 5: Some Truth" of my story "Nightshift". https://www.wattpad.com/1641567746?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=sthawriter

MichealArmstrong

 this story of yours could have been better.
          
          It felt really rushed. There wasn’t much detail of the character’s life and circumstances.
          
          Her mother’s issues should have been introduced from the onset of the story not at the ending. We should have seen the healing process.
          
          Red Dragon’s character should have been explored more, what made him breakdown, to turn into a life of crime, to hate his family.
          
          Also there was a lot of grammatical errors, next time use AI for grammatical 
          
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