stillmoth_

more to come very soon, just finishing up files for audio books for the previous entries before continuing forward but the roadmap has always been laid out 
          	
          	audiobook for section carrow is posted within the chapter

newkjohnson9

I was wondering if you had any feedback on in my story? Likes dislikes or suggestions are appreciated. I'm new to all of this writing

newkjohnson9

@stillmoth_ I didn't want it to sound stilted or too archaic. What do you mean words for usage?
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stillmoth_

@newkjohnson9 its honestly good, good foundation and structures - just give a push for more words for usage, 
            dont hesitate to go over the top when explaining something cosmic, you want it to feel vast 
            
            goodjob fr,
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stillmoth_

i appreciate any and all feedback

stillmoth_

not a problem! im always happy to support
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helpsomeonefoundme

@stillmoth_ thank you for voting on my work! I'm going to read yours, it looks interesting :)
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