TheHeadHill
give me your honest opinion on the story, like hows it coming together? im a little nervous about it
stonecoldbastard
Honesty it's coming off really good man. I like the way you have all of the anticipation building up until the final war. The only thing though is that Lela still hasn't really been been that powerful witch that we all know she is, idk if you're gonna make her THAT witch in the next book but that's what I'm really looking forward to. So then Lela and Leah would be a true match to one another.