Read my book and tell me how it is!!!!

Okay. I've just joined and still trying to get a grip on everything.
Loving wattpad. Didn't know that there were people who still liked to read
I love reading and I like writing.
I try to write in the third person for my first book. Most people write in first person- coz its mostly fantasy stories bout 'themselves' lol.

My pet peeve is bad spelling. ie: skwl!! I'm old SCHOOL like that.
:)

okay  got stuck with my first book so I sort of abandoned it for now. I started another - that guy. please read comment and vote. I love feedback. the style is very wattpadish not my normal style.