stormpiIot

whats up wattpad IM BACK

stormpiIot

honestly i swear im a writer i just dont publish sh¡t because frankly,, im a lazy writer who cant finish any story 

stormpiIot

SPIDER-MAN: HOMECOMING REVIEW!! (no major spoilers [but maybe unintentional minor spoilers])
          
          - DIVERSE. yall i liTERALLY FLOURISHED AND L I V ED because spider-man was so inCREDIBLY DIVERSE!! nearly everyone peter is around is a poc anD IM SO HAPPY!! even flash is a poc and i was so shOok
          
          - CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. marvel movies /always/ have such well-written character development, but in spider-man: homecoming, it's so evident aND BEAUTIFUL. you watch as peter humbles himself and even watch great character development with happy, tony, liz, and even vulture.
          
          - ACCURACY. out of all the marvel movies i have ever watched, this movie is the most accurent when depicting high school. asides from that, there are slivers (maybe like one line or two) of important topics like (EYYYYYYYY SUPER SUPER MINOR SPOILER) when someone talked about cowboys and indians then someone else was like "dude, wtf theyre native americans" or like "i wont go up to a monument built by slaves"
          
          - OVERALL, spider-man: homecoming exceeded all my expectations, which were pretty high! you got brilliant special effects (LIKE RLY BRILLIANT), a complex but well-written plot, great character development, accurate depictions, comedic relief, everything!! 10/10 would recommend.
          
          PS: this movie has two end-credits scenes!!! AND CAN I JUST SAY I FEEL BLESSED TO HAVE SEEN THE SECOND ONE

fandomsoundsinnocent

Thank you for reading Alchemy Jones! I really appreciate all your comments, a lot of them actually kill me because they are so so passionate or funny! I always look forward to reading them when I update the book, gives me something to look forward to.
          
          Xxx 
           -fandomsoundsinnocent

stormpiIot

Omg you're welcome!! The Alchemy Jones series is so well written and I love how you got all the character personalities spot on! I look forward to you updating more chapters, and I love your writing <3
Reply