@stormsilver1000
Aye big man, take your time when it comes to not only your story but also real life, hope your doing well and hope to one day see the next chapter when it drops
@AlwaysBetOnDrugs You can expect next chapter around late July. Working on full Asia arc at once. Almost been a year since a real chapter
Still in Hiatus?
@iielias___ I've been back at writing again around early March. I am planning for a big release but it is going to take a few more months at the least. But when I do, I promise I will deliver lots of chapters. Not at once but maybe with 1 day intervals.
I was really looking forward to continuing reading your work in fanfic /cry
@iielias___ Don't worry. Things should go back on track in a few months. I spend way too much planning this story and works associated with it to abandon it.
Update will be late this month due to my exams next week. It is 3 consecutive days so I can write freely after that. In return for the wait, a big chapter like the last two ones can be expected.
I've been curious, what does T.G.O.E: KON mean? Genuine curiosity.
@stormsilver1000 Thank you for replying so quickly, I shall wait until that moment arrives.
@AlwaysBetOnDrugs I have kept it a secret so far because the full form can easily be misunderstood. Like the story isn't about the literal meaning of the full form. That is why I haven't revealed it yet. I will reveal it when the part 1 of the story ends and then it will perfect sense.
Were there more chapters at any point?
@Orange2431 Yes. 11 chapters to be exact. But I messed the story up quite a bit. So this is a rewrite
I need to reread the light novel of dxd. I remember the anime but the light novel is still a vague memory. The next chapter will take a while; don't worry, I will not drop the story. Thanks for the amazing support you all are giving this story. See you... next month? Yeah, next month
@AMONY420 :) the reason I said Dat-Boi-Eraser was because you were using drama style. If I remember it correctly, he used to write in drama style. When his account got deleted, his gamer story was deleted too. So it would have been a good reference but it's okay. There are plenty others.
@AMONY420 I wanted to send a PM, but I just realised they removed that feature. Anyway, I will give you my review now. First of all, your description. Recommending readers to not read the book is not good. Second, Gojo himself. He is the only person from JJK in your story and he is not similar to his original character. So people won't be able to relate to him. You can also say that my version of Issei is anything except Issei but there are other characters in the story to make it "DxD". Third, lack of Characters. There are only 5 characters so far in your book. Gojo, Azazel, Koneko, Rias, and Riser. Fourth, I saw was lack of Grammar and punctuation. Grammarly can help you to an extent but you need something else. That is, fifth, familiarising yourself with more literary works. You can read fanfictions of good authors like Dat-Boi-Eraser but reading a lot of books will help you familiarise yourself with story structuring, character development and all that. Additionally, I don't prefer fast-paced stories so that is a bit minus points for me. Don't be discouraged by all this. Overall, you lack experience. Even in my case, I have written 3 stories other than the one published here. I just never published those three because I didn't have a 'north star'. Basically I didn't know where I was going. I'm sorry for sounding like a critique but I don't want you stop writing because of any reasons I mentioned.
@AMONY420 Good luck bro :)
