N30_Monster

I need to reread the light novel of dxd. I remember the anime but the light novel is still a vague memory. The next chapter will take a while; don't worry, I will not drop the story. Thanks for the amazing support you all are giving this story. See you... next month? Yeah, next month

@AMONY420 :) the reason I said Dat-Boi-Eraser was because you were using drama style. If I remember it correctly, he used to write in drama style. When his account got deleted, his gamer story was deleted too. So it would have been a good reference but it's okay. There are plenty others. 

@AMONY420 I wanted to send a PM, but I just realised they removed that feature. Anyway, I will give you my review now. 
          
          First of all, your description. Recommending readers to not read the book is not good. Second, Gojo himself. He is the only person from JJK in your story and he is not similar to his original character. So people won't be able to relate to him. You can also say that my version of Issei is anything except Issei but there are other characters in the story to make it "DxD". 
          
          Third, lack of Characters. There are only 5 characters so far in your book. Gojo, Azazel, Koneko, Rias, and Riser.
          
          Fourth, I saw was lack of Grammar and punctuation. Grammarly can help you to an extent but you need something else.
          
          That is, fifth, familiarising yourself with more literary works. You can read fanfictions of good authors like Dat-Boi-Eraser but reading a lot of books will help you familiarise yourself with story structuring, character development and all that.
          
          Additionally, I don't prefer fast-paced stories so that is a bit minus points for me.
          
          
          Don't be discouraged by all this. Overall, you lack experience. Even in my case, I have written 3 stories other than the one published here. I just never published those three because I didn't have a 'north star'. Basically I didn't know where I was going. I'm sorry for sounding like a critique but I don't want you stop writing because of any reasons I mentioned.
          
          
          

@AMONY420 Good luck bro :)

Third is Humility. You, I, and everyone else is ordinary. We all have the power to forge a world through writing and imagination. Since we are all normal, if I find something interesting, there is a high probability that many people are going to find it interesting too.
          
          Fourth, grammer and punctuation. Short answer, use grammarly. That software is really useful. There might be alternatives but I have forgotten them. It was only until I started using grammarly, I started to see the amount of mistakes I was making. 
          
          Fifth, don't try to remove something extra before looking for an opportunity to integrate them. What I mean by that is, sometimes when we write, we might put something extra, like a character or an analogy that you think will not make sense or become irrelevent as the plot progress. But perhaps wait a few moments before typing backspace, 'is there a way to make a path to suit this 'extra'? Will that path be fun to write?' If answer is yes, you might get an even better story.
          
          Last but not the least, I will say, 'power breaks'. This one like all these other rules is what worked for me the best. After posting a chapter, I would take a few days break. This might be different from other authors' advice to write consistently. I would say experiment with them. 
          
          Bonus tip: Be 'water'. Don't be constrained by all these principles and be flexible with yourself. You might find out that consuming too much content might create noise in your head, or you words just flow from your hands when you turn on music matching the content you are writing, but you wouldn't know until you have tried them both. 
          
          That's all I can say. Hope it helps . 
          
          While writing about this, I myself have gained some clarity over some principles. So, thanks for that. 

@AMONY420 Okay, so first thing is a 'north star'. You need to know where the story is headed towards. For example, I already know the ending of T.G.O.E: Kon is. But the path to the ending is flexible.
          
          Second, Ideas. No shortcuts around this one. You can consume content, other than fanfiction for ideas. I am not saying copy paste them but take inspiration from them like an artist. For example, some of the fight scenes in the latest chapters in my book resemble the fight scenes from Wind breaker.

@AMONY420 ... This is my first story. 
          I can give you some tips but knowing that I am beginner, do you still want it?

Hello! Me again, what a joy it is to see notification of a new chapter of your story! I'm waiting to see what Issei's brother says about the commitment that Issei himself doesn't know he has with Sona lol Thanks for the chapter and take your time, I'll be here to enjoy your story, take care of yourself!

One question, how often do you update the story? I am really looking forward to continuing reading it!

Thanks to everyone for making Twilight reach 1k views.